Post by Joe on Oct 19, 2006 12:39:11 GMT -5
Joe MacBain to Judge
Prodigy Rules
3 Rounds
No Time Limits
Chalked Weapons
Stances
{{{Killer of the Sleen}}}
Zhou Yu
Outrider
Tuchuk/C-C
==is in/around the pit==
: says to §ecuri§HeadSlaver HouseO:.... Walking from the railing at the edge of the pit I stand My 5'9 frame stands in at 195lbs solid build lean cut muscle looking out at you from under the Y slotted Helm on My head that was strapped tight under My chin chain guard to cover the back of My neck My right hand reaches up and draws from the scabbard on My back a 24"gorean short sword in My left hand sat a 24" round shield strapped onto My left arm metal rim My frame now stands 5 feet away from you right foot sweeps back half apace behind Me as I bring My shields face to cover My upper left thigh and from chin down on My face My left side facing You I nod ready to rock and roll
5’9
195lbs
Y helm strapped down
Right - 24” sword
Left - 24” round shield
5 feet distance
§ecuri§
Head
Slaver
House
OF
North§taR
says to {{{Killer of the Sleen}}: Weapons and stance .. I stand five foot eight, two hundred pounds. In my right hand I have a thirty two inch shield made of wood with a lachered leather cover, the shield edged with fine Turian steel, the center has a round steel boss of the same material, behind the boss I grip leather covered dowl. In my left hand and resting on my left shoulder I have a battle axe the single blade is 14 inches the shaft made of tem wood is 32 inches. I wear the Y slot helm. I also have a sleen knife in the left boot. As well as the seven quiva of the Kassar on a bandolier on my chest from my right shoulder to my left hip. The front of my shield faces you squarely and is kept about and hands width from my body … My Right leg is bent the knee facing your chest squarely, the ball of my foot rests lightly, my left leg is back bent and my foot points out and away, I am almost in a crouch my shield protects from below my eyes to just above my knee. I await your post
5’8
200lbs
Y helm not strapped
Right - 32” shield…TYPE?
Left - 32” single blade axe
Left boot - sleen knife
Chest - 7 quiva
5 feet distance remains, that’s a lot of stuff
Round 1
{{{Killer of the Sleen}}}
Zhou Yu
Outrider
Tuchuk/C-C
==is in/around the pit==
: says to §ecuri§HeadSlaver HouseO:.... My right foot shoves My body forwad keeping My shiled facing You as I close the distance to 2 feet now My right arm holding the sword in My hand at an arch tip of the blade points out to My right elbows bends as I pump My shiled into Yours attemptiing to shove you and send you off balance
at the same time I am brining My sword in a right to left downward anglked strike to your right ankle attmepting to slah it open and get things rolling here maybe cut deep and tak eyou out
Works
Strike of the blade needs a POV -1, He is 2 feet away and you have a 24” blade, I now see you having to lean down to do this strike and you are not in a good position, plus the shove will help him move back if he takes that advantage.
Distance 2 feet
9
§ecuri§
Head
Slaver
House
OF
North§taR
says to {{{Killer of the Sleen}}: Your shield certainly does come into contact with mine I turn my shield in slightly towards myself so that the left edge comes to my left shoulder that allows you to when you pump to roll to my left I at the same time allow myself a step back protecting my ankle from the vicious swipe which if I am looking at this right makes you extend your sword arm down and to my left. I react as quickly as I may by bringing my axe up and over my shield to come crashing down and over your shield to hopefully either bounce off your helmet and into either your right shoulder or left depending on the deflection.
The left edge from what perspective? -1 How far are you stepping back? -1 unclear
Need to separate you reaction and counter -1 clean
Makes it 4 feet distance
7
Round 2
{{{Killer of the Sleen}}}
Zhou Yu
Outrider
Tuchuk/C-C
==is in/around the pit==
: says to §ecuri§HeadSlaver HouseO:.... Going With My pump Im sending My shiled to skitter over and to the right of Me face first of the shiled swings in a left to right motion attemptiing to let your weapon clash on the flat surface and hold it attemtping to pump the axe hard and away to Your left side wide My right foot jerks back half a pace distance now 2.5 feet left foot comes forwad and knee bends abit
simaltaneiously My right foot now steps forwads left foot comming back half apace I bend My right arm sword holds the blade hip level tip facing you I give a half thrust aiming My sword at your left shoulder joint attmeptiing to let the steel rend flash and make you drop your axe
I read and read this over and over, Your shield is not above your head and moving it over to your right will not stop the axe head coming down on your head, I see you taking a full swing down on your helmet and it splitting the metal and cleaving your skull. Right here you could have table topped your shield and step in fast, thrusting your sword at his exposed left side and ended it. Match is over.
§ecuri§
Head
Slaver
House
OF
North§taR
says to {{{Killer of the Sleen}}: I turn my left shoulder (pulling my axe back at shoulder length), and my left foot back and away to avoid your thrust forward …............. I simultaneously give a quick combination of a hard short jerk with my shield from my right to left (hoping that the sharp metal edge of my shield catches your now extended sword arm) the second part of the combination being the hard fast downward swing, and pull of my axe trying to try and trap your arm with enough force to break it.
Round 3
{{{Killer of the Sleen}}}
Zhou Yu
Outrider
Tuchuk/C-C
==is in/around the pit==
: says to §ecuri§HeadSlaver HouseO:.... Seeing My thrust being avoided at the same time your shifting Your shiled I slam the face of My shiled aimed at the left side rim of your shiled shoving hard attemtping to angle the rim of your shiled futher into yoru body attmetping to press it against you fully by now My right arm already moving back right foot jerks back hard to My left half a pace now left foot comes forward knee bends keeping the distance 2.5 feet attempting to clear My right side away from yoru axe and keep My left side presented to you on Your would be right side My left (mpov)
At the same time I angle My right arm up elbow bends poiting the blade over the rim of My shiled giving a half thrust aiming the tip of My blkade into you right eyes attemtping to mutilate your blind your real good and maybe kill you here
§ecuri§
Head
Slaver
House
OF
North§taR
says to {{{Killer of the Sleen}}: As you SLAM my shield into me I twist away and to my left with the force of your blow it turning me away from your right arm so that your sword thrust finds only air ….. My axe however is now on a fully extended round house swing coming over my left shoulder, the top of my shield, and yours (hopefully) to find itself embedded in either left shoulder blade or if you’ve stepped back your left chest!
Final Defence
{{{Killer of the Sleen}}}
Zhou Yu
Outrider
Tuchuk/C-C
==is in/around the pit==
: says to §ecuri§HeadSlaver HouseO:.... Simply shifting My right foot back again half a pace jerking My right shoulder to the left of Me waist twist to the right I manuver My sheild off yours keepign My left side facing you the whole time(mpov)I pump the face of My shiled up angling the rim right rim of My shiled into My right abit to catch your axe flat and I usie My strength to use momentum and shove the shiled down along with your axe to the sands left leg bends ot a knee and so does My right knee as I flow with the movement " good spar
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Results:
Securis winner by death blow.
Comments:
Securis: You made a lot of little errors in the first post and could have avoided them with just reading up on the rules but nice reactions and was my first choice when reading for the most part.
Zhou: You are improving with every match you have and I was sorry to see this end, you just need to visualise more and perhaps try a little less on the finer details.
Any questions: See deduction section
Well fought to you both, is not easy to put your work up to show.
Joe
Prodigy Rules
3 Rounds
No Time Limits
Chalked Weapons
Stances
{{{Killer of the Sleen}}}
Zhou Yu
Outrider
Tuchuk/C-C
==is in/around the pit==
: says to §ecuri§HeadSlaver HouseO:.... Walking from the railing at the edge of the pit I stand My 5'9 frame stands in at 195lbs solid build lean cut muscle looking out at you from under the Y slotted Helm on My head that was strapped tight under My chin chain guard to cover the back of My neck My right hand reaches up and draws from the scabbard on My back a 24"gorean short sword in My left hand sat a 24" round shield strapped onto My left arm metal rim My frame now stands 5 feet away from you right foot sweeps back half apace behind Me as I bring My shields face to cover My upper left thigh and from chin down on My face My left side facing You I nod ready to rock and roll
5’9
195lbs
Y helm strapped down
Right - 24” sword
Left - 24” round shield
5 feet distance
§ecuri§
Head
Slaver
House
OF
North§taR
says to {{{Killer of the Sleen}}: Weapons and stance .. I stand five foot eight, two hundred pounds. In my right hand I have a thirty two inch shield made of wood with a lachered leather cover, the shield edged with fine Turian steel, the center has a round steel boss of the same material, behind the boss I grip leather covered dowl. In my left hand and resting on my left shoulder I have a battle axe the single blade is 14 inches the shaft made of tem wood is 32 inches. I wear the Y slot helm. I also have a sleen knife in the left boot. As well as the seven quiva of the Kassar on a bandolier on my chest from my right shoulder to my left hip. The front of my shield faces you squarely and is kept about and hands width from my body … My Right leg is bent the knee facing your chest squarely, the ball of my foot rests lightly, my left leg is back bent and my foot points out and away, I am almost in a crouch my shield protects from below my eyes to just above my knee. I await your post
5’8
200lbs
Y helm not strapped
Right - 32” shield…TYPE?
Left - 32” single blade axe
Left boot - sleen knife
Chest - 7 quiva
5 feet distance remains, that’s a lot of stuff
Round 1
{{{Killer of the Sleen}}}
Zhou Yu
Outrider
Tuchuk/C-C
==is in/around the pit==
: says to §ecuri§HeadSlaver HouseO:.... My right foot shoves My body forwad keeping My shiled facing You as I close the distance to 2 feet now My right arm holding the sword in My hand at an arch tip of the blade points out to My right elbows bends as I pump My shiled into Yours attemptiing to shove you and send you off balance
at the same time I am brining My sword in a right to left downward anglked strike to your right ankle attmepting to slah it open and get things rolling here maybe cut deep and tak eyou out
Works
Strike of the blade needs a POV -1, He is 2 feet away and you have a 24” blade, I now see you having to lean down to do this strike and you are not in a good position, plus the shove will help him move back if he takes that advantage.
Distance 2 feet
9
§ecuri§
Head
Slaver
House
OF
North§taR
says to {{{Killer of the Sleen}}: Your shield certainly does come into contact with mine I turn my shield in slightly towards myself so that the left edge comes to my left shoulder that allows you to when you pump to roll to my left I at the same time allow myself a step back protecting my ankle from the vicious swipe which if I am looking at this right makes you extend your sword arm down and to my left. I react as quickly as I may by bringing my axe up and over my shield to come crashing down and over your shield to hopefully either bounce off your helmet and into either your right shoulder or left depending on the deflection.
The left edge from what perspective? -1 How far are you stepping back? -1 unclear
Need to separate you reaction and counter -1 clean
Makes it 4 feet distance
7
Round 2
{{{Killer of the Sleen}}}
Zhou Yu
Outrider
Tuchuk/C-C
==is in/around the pit==
: says to §ecuri§HeadSlaver HouseO:.... Going With My pump Im sending My shiled to skitter over and to the right of Me face first of the shiled swings in a left to right motion attemptiing to let your weapon clash on the flat surface and hold it attemtping to pump the axe hard and away to Your left side wide My right foot jerks back half a pace distance now 2.5 feet left foot comes forwad and knee bends abit
simaltaneiously My right foot now steps forwads left foot comming back half apace I bend My right arm sword holds the blade hip level tip facing you I give a half thrust aiming My sword at your left shoulder joint attmeptiing to let the steel rend flash and make you drop your axe
I read and read this over and over, Your shield is not above your head and moving it over to your right will not stop the axe head coming down on your head, I see you taking a full swing down on your helmet and it splitting the metal and cleaving your skull. Right here you could have table topped your shield and step in fast, thrusting your sword at his exposed left side and ended it. Match is over.
§ecuri§
Head
Slaver
House
OF
North§taR
says to {{{Killer of the Sleen}}: I turn my left shoulder (pulling my axe back at shoulder length), and my left foot back and away to avoid your thrust forward …............. I simultaneously give a quick combination of a hard short jerk with my shield from my right to left (hoping that the sharp metal edge of my shield catches your now extended sword arm) the second part of the combination being the hard fast downward swing, and pull of my axe trying to try and trap your arm with enough force to break it.
Round 3
{{{Killer of the Sleen}}}
Zhou Yu
Outrider
Tuchuk/C-C
==is in/around the pit==
: says to §ecuri§HeadSlaver HouseO:.... Seeing My thrust being avoided at the same time your shifting Your shiled I slam the face of My shiled aimed at the left side rim of your shiled shoving hard attemtping to angle the rim of your shiled futher into yoru body attmetping to press it against you fully by now My right arm already moving back right foot jerks back hard to My left half a pace now left foot comes forward knee bends keeping the distance 2.5 feet attempting to clear My right side away from yoru axe and keep My left side presented to you on Your would be right side My left (mpov)
At the same time I angle My right arm up elbow bends poiting the blade over the rim of My shiled giving a half thrust aiming the tip of My blkade into you right eyes attemtping to mutilate your blind your real good and maybe kill you here
§ecuri§
Head
Slaver
House
OF
North§taR
says to {{{Killer of the Sleen}}: As you SLAM my shield into me I twist away and to my left with the force of your blow it turning me away from your right arm so that your sword thrust finds only air ….. My axe however is now on a fully extended round house swing coming over my left shoulder, the top of my shield, and yours (hopefully) to find itself embedded in either left shoulder blade or if you’ve stepped back your left chest!
Final Defence
{{{Killer of the Sleen}}}
Zhou Yu
Outrider
Tuchuk/C-C
==is in/around the pit==
: says to §ecuri§HeadSlaver HouseO:.... Simply shifting My right foot back again half a pace jerking My right shoulder to the left of Me waist twist to the right I manuver My sheild off yours keepign My left side facing you the whole time(mpov)I pump the face of My shiled up angling the rim right rim of My shiled into My right abit to catch your axe flat and I usie My strength to use momentum and shove the shiled down along with your axe to the sands left leg bends ot a knee and so does My right knee as I flow with the movement " good spar
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Results:
Securis winner by death blow.
Comments:
Securis: You made a lot of little errors in the first post and could have avoided them with just reading up on the rules but nice reactions and was my first choice when reading for the most part.
Zhou: You are improving with every match you have and I was sorry to see this end, you just need to visualise more and perhaps try a little less on the finer details.
Any questions: See deduction section
Well fought to you both, is not easy to put your work up to show.
Joe