Post by Joe on Oct 19, 2006 12:40:17 GMT -5
Prodigy Rules
3 Rounds
No Time Limits
Chalked Weapons
Stances
|Jyrakai|
== Is around the main fire of camp==
: says to {{{Killer of the Sleen}}:.... I mutttered in a good natured way.. and braided my hair out the damned way. putting it under the rounded helmet that had a meshing over my face made of small metal rings.. that strapped in place.. I took up a spot on the grass.. on a slight incline from you, putting my 6'1 225 self 2 paces from you.. in my right hand was the short sword, that measuring at 22 inches.. in left was a dagger that was at 12 inches.. I kept the sword held at waist level, crossed diagonally before me towards my left shoulder.. and then put right foot before the left, turning my torso slightly so weight was distributed all even and stuff.. the dagger held low, near my left side, close to the ribs.. I put myself up on my toes a bit to move quicker and nodded watching to see what kind of stance youd take. *
6’1
225lbs
Round helm
Right hand – short sword 22”
Left hand - ? dagger..of some size?
2 paces or 6 feet
Zhou Yu
Outrider
Tuchuk/C-C
== Is around the main fire of camp==
: says to |Jyrakai|:.... My frame comes walking up to You standing 5 feet away (mpov) I stood 5'9 wieighing at 195lbs solid work hardend muscle I gazed at you from under the y slotted helm strapped tight under My chin I stood sqaurely with you then My right foot sweeps back left hand brining up the 24" round shiled metal rim wich I bring to cover form My chin down all the way to My left upper thigh My legs bend getting ready as My right hand draws from the scabbard on My back a 24" gorean shortsword 3" blade and 4"metal crossgaurd which I bring to rest the hilt hip level blade of the sword points vertacally My head nods to You ready to rock and roll
5’9
195lbs
Y helm strapped
Right hand – short sword 24”
Left hand – round shield 24”
Now at 5 feet distance
Round 1
|Jyrakai|
== Is around the main fire of camp==
: says to {{{Killer of the Sleen}}:.... seeing you closed the distance by another half pace or so, I take in your stance and then close to just under 2 feet, putting us both in our swords' range.. I moved to My left (MPOV) , keeping the shortsword held in its defensive place,
while I brought the dagger in an upward thrust for the underside of your forearm in a stabbing motion, hoping to hit that arm early on and slow down your sword arm a bit..
Works
Okay you are 2 feet away and your left dagger hand is back as your right foot leads on, his sword hilt is at his hip so his forearm is behind that sword and the blade is vertical (pointing up) as His left leg leads with a shield. I see you having to lean your shoulder right in to be able to try and hook under his hilt, if you get passed his shield and he does not lean back and just chop your off.
10
Zhou Yu
Outrider
Tuchuk/C-C
== Is around the main fire of camp==
: says to |Jyrakai|:.... The distance from My stance didnt change still keeping 5 feet from you(mpov)keeping My left side facing your as you come over to My right lighting reflexes I jerk My shiled hard and over left to right motion atmetping to catch the rime of My shiled against your dagger to skitter it away at the saem time I pivot on My left foot swing My right leg back as well as My right side right foot sits half a pace behind Me distance 2.5feet hopefully clearing My right side away and I give My shiled a pump attmepting to send your dagger far and to your left
at the same time I take a step in with My right foot hard and fast distance 2feet My right hand points the blade and thrust hard downward into your left knee hopeing I reding your knee out of commotion
Works but the left to right needs a POV, I know is obvious but that’s the rules –1
Okay this is getting like a game of twister…His left knee is back and his right leg is leading as you push your right shoulder back in the turn, why did you not just counter with your shield and break his damn arm when he went for the stab? I see you having to lean over to your right side now to try and reach over to stick his knee and put your torso right over his range area, you have a shield there and I hope it helps.
9
Round 2
|Jyrakai|
== Is around the main fire of camp==
: says to {{{Killer of the Sleen}}:.... the shield moving in, I braced slightly for the strike.. the dagger veering enough to not hit your arm.. then, since my arm had been beneath yours, now only off to the left a bit, I simply brought it in a counterclockwise arc, with the intention of sending your right arm out and away from my knee
while that was going on, I too pivoted, putting my left leg further back behind the right, while a fast twist of my wrist an a lift of My right arm sent the hilt of my short sword towards the side of your head, hoping to take advantage of the shield being over more.. *
What arm is beneath his? –1 brought ‘it’ in with a counter clockwise to what POV? –1 unclear. You are trying to block his right sword strike to your left knee with a left forearm block? If that is the case then I will give you that and see you now twisting to your right to do this and sort of hunched over.
Works but could have been worded better.
8
Zhou Yu
Outrider
Tuchuk/C-C
== Is around the main fire of camp==
: says to |Jyrakai|:.... At the smae time your manage to get My sword with yoru dagger I pivot on My right foot right arm brings the ssword back My left foot left moves half a pace behind Me distance 2.5 feet I jerk My shiled right to left motion shunting My shiled attmepting to cover My left side of My face from your hilt
I push off with My left foot right foot leading moving to your left side distance 1.5feet swinging My blade blade horozontal in a right to left motion aimed at your downward arch aimed at your right ankle where your foot meets the rest of your leg attmetping to sever and take you out quickjly
What? I read this a few times and you cluster fuck yourself here, you need a My or POV on the shield jerk –1 He is going for your head! Lift the damn shield or lower your damn head, I see the pommel hit the left side of your helm and stun you while you are also off balance –1
You are going around to his left side and going for his right ankle, So I see you going for the inside of his right leading ankle and that strike needs a POV on it -1
6
Round 3
|Jyrakai|
== Is around the main fire of camp==
: says to {{{Killer of the Sleen}}:.... as the blade came down towards my right ankle.. and my left arm stil beneath your right just in case such a crazy thing was attempted.. I pivoted back that right foot, and at the same time lifted my left arm straight up, hoping to knock your arm in a wild mess away from you, leaving an attack opportunity..
then with your shield high, I quickly brought My right arm down, the sword turning clockwise in my hand as I aimed a slash for your outer left thigh, hoping to get below the shield in time..
You are hunched even low than he is and with him stunned his swing is not going to be very good or powerful, problem is that you hook his blade UP, so I am seeing you uppercut your forearm under his and that means his blade is out and under your chest, you just hooked his blade into your chest with the blade edge and your lack of shield now gives you a slice, not overly deep, across your chest –1
His shield is not high and hence he got a dink in the head, sword turns clockwise to what POV? –1 rest works
7
Zhou Yu
Outrider
Tuchuk/C-C
== Is around the main fire of camp==
: says to |Jyrakai|:.... My arm goes back wide right hand twists the blade going with the motion blade pointing out then I bring it back at the same time I quickly jerk My shiled down covering My left knee and thigh attmpting to skitter your sword and and to the right
at the same time I jerk My right foot back half a pace left foot leadingMy right arm bring My sword overhead and downward in a cresent arch left to right motiong aimed right upper shoulder attemptiing to let My steel rend your shoulder and sword arm useless
What arm goes back? –1 shield block works as was never lifted up in the first place and his sword was not drawn back from hitting you in the head so you have time to do that move…and to the right? Who’s right –1
Okay a Casius Clay shuffle to get in, who’s left to right? – 1 rest works but leaves you in close and exposed right ribs to a left held dagger.
3
Final Defence
|Jyrakai|
== Is around the main fire of camp==
: says to {{{Killer of the Sleen}}:.... the sword following through in the arc I had started, I saw your sword coming down towards My right shoulder.. I still had my right foot back.. so it was a matter of leaning back upon it.. and following through with the arc to parry away the strike towards my shoulder, hopefully knocking your arm from the inside outward once more.. *
The sword? My sword, Your sword –1 rest works
6
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Results:
Zhou: 3 points and head ache
Jyrakai: 6 points and skin slash flesh wound over the chest
Winner: Jyrakai on points system of sport spar.
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Comments:
I could have stopped this when Zhou hot 5 points, as the rules say ‘may’ I chose not to as it did mean more work for Me but I felt that the fighters needed the guidance. Even though Zhou caused the greater injury it was not a draw in the slightest with the amount of rule errors that got made and hence I making Jyrakai the winner in the bout.
This was a case of both of You trying to run before walking and falling flat on Your faces. I would take the time to look at what You need to work on and do some spars with just a slow basic idea and then get that right….move on then to more complicated footing and distance and build up a gen overall knowledge of how that all fits together. A fighter will spends days just doing a thrust move, over and over till he is happy with it and then move on, taking that skill and adding others. The same is true in the prodigy system.
Any questions You have My email.
Deduction questions? Let Me know You have one then post it on the deduction thread. I will NOT answer deductions in this thread.
Well fought
Joe MacBain
3 Rounds
No Time Limits
Chalked Weapons
Stances
|Jyrakai|
== Is around the main fire of camp==
: says to {{{Killer of the Sleen}}:.... I mutttered in a good natured way.. and braided my hair out the damned way. putting it under the rounded helmet that had a meshing over my face made of small metal rings.. that strapped in place.. I took up a spot on the grass.. on a slight incline from you, putting my 6'1 225 self 2 paces from you.. in my right hand was the short sword, that measuring at 22 inches.. in left was a dagger that was at 12 inches.. I kept the sword held at waist level, crossed diagonally before me towards my left shoulder.. and then put right foot before the left, turning my torso slightly so weight was distributed all even and stuff.. the dagger held low, near my left side, close to the ribs.. I put myself up on my toes a bit to move quicker and nodded watching to see what kind of stance youd take. *
6’1
225lbs
Round helm
Right hand – short sword 22”
Left hand - ? dagger..of some size?
2 paces or 6 feet
Zhou Yu
Outrider
Tuchuk/C-C
== Is around the main fire of camp==
: says to |Jyrakai|:.... My frame comes walking up to You standing 5 feet away (mpov) I stood 5'9 wieighing at 195lbs solid work hardend muscle I gazed at you from under the y slotted helm strapped tight under My chin I stood sqaurely with you then My right foot sweeps back left hand brining up the 24" round shiled metal rim wich I bring to cover form My chin down all the way to My left upper thigh My legs bend getting ready as My right hand draws from the scabbard on My back a 24" gorean shortsword 3" blade and 4"metal crossgaurd which I bring to rest the hilt hip level blade of the sword points vertacally My head nods to You ready to rock and roll
5’9
195lbs
Y helm strapped
Right hand – short sword 24”
Left hand – round shield 24”
Now at 5 feet distance
Round 1
|Jyrakai|
== Is around the main fire of camp==
: says to {{{Killer of the Sleen}}:.... seeing you closed the distance by another half pace or so, I take in your stance and then close to just under 2 feet, putting us both in our swords' range.. I moved to My left (MPOV) , keeping the shortsword held in its defensive place,
while I brought the dagger in an upward thrust for the underside of your forearm in a stabbing motion, hoping to hit that arm early on and slow down your sword arm a bit..
Works
Okay you are 2 feet away and your left dagger hand is back as your right foot leads on, his sword hilt is at his hip so his forearm is behind that sword and the blade is vertical (pointing up) as His left leg leads with a shield. I see you having to lean your shoulder right in to be able to try and hook under his hilt, if you get passed his shield and he does not lean back and just chop your off.
10
Zhou Yu
Outrider
Tuchuk/C-C
== Is around the main fire of camp==
: says to |Jyrakai|:.... The distance from My stance didnt change still keeping 5 feet from you(mpov)keeping My left side facing your as you come over to My right lighting reflexes I jerk My shiled hard and over left to right motion atmetping to catch the rime of My shiled against your dagger to skitter it away at the saem time I pivot on My left foot swing My right leg back as well as My right side right foot sits half a pace behind Me distance 2.5feet hopefully clearing My right side away and I give My shiled a pump attmepting to send your dagger far and to your left
at the same time I take a step in with My right foot hard and fast distance 2feet My right hand points the blade and thrust hard downward into your left knee hopeing I reding your knee out of commotion
Works but the left to right needs a POV, I know is obvious but that’s the rules –1
Okay this is getting like a game of twister…His left knee is back and his right leg is leading as you push your right shoulder back in the turn, why did you not just counter with your shield and break his damn arm when he went for the stab? I see you having to lean over to your right side now to try and reach over to stick his knee and put your torso right over his range area, you have a shield there and I hope it helps.
9
Round 2
|Jyrakai|
== Is around the main fire of camp==
: says to {{{Killer of the Sleen}}:.... the shield moving in, I braced slightly for the strike.. the dagger veering enough to not hit your arm.. then, since my arm had been beneath yours, now only off to the left a bit, I simply brought it in a counterclockwise arc, with the intention of sending your right arm out and away from my knee
while that was going on, I too pivoted, putting my left leg further back behind the right, while a fast twist of my wrist an a lift of My right arm sent the hilt of my short sword towards the side of your head, hoping to take advantage of the shield being over more.. *
What arm is beneath his? –1 brought ‘it’ in with a counter clockwise to what POV? –1 unclear. You are trying to block his right sword strike to your left knee with a left forearm block? If that is the case then I will give you that and see you now twisting to your right to do this and sort of hunched over.
Works but could have been worded better.
8
Zhou Yu
Outrider
Tuchuk/C-C
== Is around the main fire of camp==
: says to |Jyrakai|:.... At the smae time your manage to get My sword with yoru dagger I pivot on My right foot right arm brings the ssword back My left foot left moves half a pace behind Me distance 2.5 feet I jerk My shiled right to left motion shunting My shiled attmepting to cover My left side of My face from your hilt
I push off with My left foot right foot leading moving to your left side distance 1.5feet swinging My blade blade horozontal in a right to left motion aimed at your downward arch aimed at your right ankle where your foot meets the rest of your leg attmetping to sever and take you out quickjly
What? I read this a few times and you cluster fuck yourself here, you need a My or POV on the shield jerk –1 He is going for your head! Lift the damn shield or lower your damn head, I see the pommel hit the left side of your helm and stun you while you are also off balance –1
You are going around to his left side and going for his right ankle, So I see you going for the inside of his right leading ankle and that strike needs a POV on it -1
6
Round 3
|Jyrakai|
== Is around the main fire of camp==
: says to {{{Killer of the Sleen}}:.... as the blade came down towards my right ankle.. and my left arm stil beneath your right just in case such a crazy thing was attempted.. I pivoted back that right foot, and at the same time lifted my left arm straight up, hoping to knock your arm in a wild mess away from you, leaving an attack opportunity..
then with your shield high, I quickly brought My right arm down, the sword turning clockwise in my hand as I aimed a slash for your outer left thigh, hoping to get below the shield in time..
You are hunched even low than he is and with him stunned his swing is not going to be very good or powerful, problem is that you hook his blade UP, so I am seeing you uppercut your forearm under his and that means his blade is out and under your chest, you just hooked his blade into your chest with the blade edge and your lack of shield now gives you a slice, not overly deep, across your chest –1
His shield is not high and hence he got a dink in the head, sword turns clockwise to what POV? –1 rest works
7
Zhou Yu
Outrider
Tuchuk/C-C
== Is around the main fire of camp==
: says to |Jyrakai|:.... My arm goes back wide right hand twists the blade going with the motion blade pointing out then I bring it back at the same time I quickly jerk My shiled down covering My left knee and thigh attmpting to skitter your sword and and to the right
at the same time I jerk My right foot back half a pace left foot leadingMy right arm bring My sword overhead and downward in a cresent arch left to right motiong aimed right upper shoulder attemptiing to let My steel rend your shoulder and sword arm useless
What arm goes back? –1 shield block works as was never lifted up in the first place and his sword was not drawn back from hitting you in the head so you have time to do that move…and to the right? Who’s right –1
Okay a Casius Clay shuffle to get in, who’s left to right? – 1 rest works but leaves you in close and exposed right ribs to a left held dagger.
3
Final Defence
|Jyrakai|
== Is around the main fire of camp==
: says to {{{Killer of the Sleen}}:.... the sword following through in the arc I had started, I saw your sword coming down towards My right shoulder.. I still had my right foot back.. so it was a matter of leaning back upon it.. and following through with the arc to parry away the strike towards my shoulder, hopefully knocking your arm from the inside outward once more.. *
The sword? My sword, Your sword –1 rest works
6
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Results:
Zhou: 3 points and head ache
Jyrakai: 6 points and skin slash flesh wound over the chest
Winner: Jyrakai on points system of sport spar.
++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Comments:
I could have stopped this when Zhou hot 5 points, as the rules say ‘may’ I chose not to as it did mean more work for Me but I felt that the fighters needed the guidance. Even though Zhou caused the greater injury it was not a draw in the slightest with the amount of rule errors that got made and hence I making Jyrakai the winner in the bout.
This was a case of both of You trying to run before walking and falling flat on Your faces. I would take the time to look at what You need to work on and do some spars with just a slow basic idea and then get that right….move on then to more complicated footing and distance and build up a gen overall knowledge of how that all fits together. A fighter will spends days just doing a thrust move, over and over till he is happy with it and then move on, taking that skill and adding others. The same is true in the prodigy system.
Any questions You have My email.
Deduction questions? Let Me know You have one then post it on the deduction thread. I will NOT answer deductions in this thread.
Well fought
Joe MacBain