Post by Joe on Oct 11, 2006 6:14:31 GMT -5
Joe MacBain to Judge
Prodigy Rules
3 Rounds
No Time Limits
Mock Everything
Stances
10/09/06-15:29:34)
Ollie Olafson
Isle of Scagnar - CC
== In the Stands that surround the Fighting Pit ==
: says to {{{Killer of the Sleen}}:.... Looking down at you from the 8+ feet, 100 stones (400lb's), A steel Torvaldslander helm with a nastal and mail drape on my head was placed over the head with the left hand, a leather jerkin with woolen tunic, Master belt, and Tool Belt, leather britches and tarnboots.
A 38” double edged longsword, 12” hilt and 8” cross guard in in my right hand over my right shoulderblade, point facing away from you.
In the left arm a 48" diameter Torvaldsland shield, a 10" diameter steel boss center, the shield made of wood, with that of a leather stretched hide on top. Clipped into place by metal flat clips on the sides of the shield. The shield's placement was a hand from the bottom of the chin. Three inches from the center of my body, out about a hand angled to the left, to allow right hand movement.
A 8" quiva rests in a sheath to the left of my masterbelt.
"Well, good to meetcha there Zhou... of the Tuchuk..."
8’
400lbs
Helm Y visor
Right hand 38” Torv longsword
Left hand 48” round shield . Note: don’t use ‘hand’ as a distance when taking about hands Man.
8” Quiva left hip am going with
10/09/06-15:33:04) {{{Killer of the Sleen}}}
Zhou Yu
{{{Outrider}}}
== On the sand of the Fighting Pit ==
: says to ALL:.... Walkign towards the sands I hope into the pit placing My y slotted helm onto My head strapping it up soon after My right hand draws My 22" gorean shortsword 4inch blade walking to the center of the pit sitting on My left arm was a round shiled 24" inches that covers My left shoulder and arm My right foot sweeps back bahind Me left foot points toes forward right holding My steel hilt hip level tip of the blade points to vertically as I keep My left saide face You as I nod ready to go
6’
200lbs
Helm on head Y visor
Right hand 22” short sword (4 inch blade? Assume you mean ‘width’)
Left hand 24” round shield
No distance….never a clever thing to miss out on!!
Round 1
10/09/06-15:39:15)
Ollie Olafson
Isle of Scagnar - CC
== On the sand of the Fighting Pit ==
: says to {{{Killer of the Sleen}}:.... I hold my shield level and to the left the right edge comming to about middle of my frame. The top of which was under the chin, the bottom was just above that of the kneecap, angled so the boss center was at your middle. Stepping forewards to being at a foot and a half, I drew the sword down and to that of the left going to try and hit your left side of the waist, angling it to go upwards under that of your shield's edge as the pommel of the blade was pushed forewards, to angle the sword up and around your shield. on the left side of it.
The left? Ollie you need to say who’s left –1 confusion
You need to space Your counter from the reaction –1
THAT was an ugly arse start if ever I have seen one, I would not normally say so for a newbie…but Your not…get a grip Big Man.
Distance now 1.5 feet
8
10/09/06-15:45:57) {{{Killer of the Sleen}}}
Zhou Yu
{{{Outrider}}}
== On the sand of the Fighting Pit ==
: says to Ollie Olafson Isle of Sc:.... At the same time You are comming in 1"1./2 feet from My left side it was facing You My left foot darts back half a pace behiund Me right foot following up to come ahead of Me half a pace My left arm drops My shiled down to cover My left side hoepfully I catch Your sword My right foot digs in to the sand and I give a hard shove right to left mottion to attempt to sohove Your sword hard and to the the right (My left )
simaltaneiously I thrust and tip My sword aimed at Your left knee cap attemtping to rend Your big tree trunk leg out of comotion
You are taking a full block on that small shield from a HUGE giant of a Man, the North sword is made for smashing shields and for cleaving people in twain, You would also be shunted over to Your right side from a blow like this and that little Casius Clay shuffle. So –1 unrealistic but it does work and I am having Your shield cracked, You take more full on blows like that and the shield You have will not survive.
9
Round 2
10/09/06-15:56:16)
Ollie Olafson
Isle of Scagnar - CC
== On the sand of the Fighting Pit ==
: says to {{{Killer of the Sleen}}:.... "Come on... I have a bond to play with in about ten.." I said wiggling them eyebrows atcha. I watched you do the fancy two stepp'n, good movements mostly. I push down on the left leg, dropping to a kneel, in doing such the movement is also good to bring the shield that was already there at the top of the kneecap to covering the whole left leg and chest nicely. Meaning that your sword would hopefully be deflected off the middle of the shield, as I did this simple movement as you did a few movements to try and get out of the original quick strike I had done to you.
I then take full advatage of your shield being out to the far left, as my own sword just swept down the length of your shield and as I fell so did the blade going to using the edge of your shield as a guide as I drew the sword now from that of your left side, at your kneecap, using the angle of my shield that was still angled to your center to perhaps hide the impact the sword would make on your leg. As the edge of my shield was at my waist, and now almost to finding purchase but not overly to that of your waist from you moving inwards on me. I twisted the blade that was arriving to your left leg, all the way up and perhaps go and cut off some precious parts of your's or cut you in two.. "Hope ya don't want kids.." I said as the blade rose between your legs, or that was the hope if successful in slicing through your left leg or atleast along it. I also push forewards on that of the left knee, so that I would move the blade nice and squarely foreward into you.
That works
Far left? HIS far left –1, a bit messy but I get what You are going for here, I would skip the chat as that will give someone the opening of saying your slower and as You chat and strike I… ta dar!
7
(10/09/06-16:02:39) {{{Killer of the Sleen}}}
Zhou Yu
{{{Outrider}}}
== On the sand of the Fighting Pit ==
: says to Ollie Olafson Isle of Sc:.... Quickly dropping with the motions of Your blade that wants to sink down with Your body I keep it covering My left side dropping My arm hard letting the face of My shiled come down to cover My left knee right ;lleg pants down frim on the knee left knee bends as well shiled covering My left knee I move the shiled from left to right sovering My lower body from left leg over to My hips attmepting to stop your blade here
My right arm angles My blade arm cocks up elbow bends and I thrust My sword that was comming back from the delfected attack aimed at Your inner rtight arm where the shoulder meets the rest of the body attemtping to rend and cripple your sword arm
left to right? Yours or His…is this contagious? –1 but I get what Your doing and from that close is not going to have the same impact on a shield as a swing would.
You going over the top or around that HUGE shield of His? –1 lack of description. It is vital when a shield is in play to say HOW you are dealing with that obstacle.
7
Round 3
10/09/06-16:09:49)
Ollie Olafson
Isle of Scagnar - CC
== On the sand of the Fighting Pit ==
: says to {{{Killer of the Sleen}}:.... I just nicely push that of the shield upwards like a crashing rocket to the left side of mine, angling the edge of the shield so that it matches with the tip of the head, the movement did not need to be much, as the small amount of 'avaiability' of space you would have to go for was removed and instead a wall of shield was now presented to your lovely attempt, the shield covering now that of the whole left arm nicely. Meaning the shielder was now covered with shield, and I got a nice nasty 'CLANG' as the edge of your sword had to go somewhere and that was to the side of the helmet I wore, which protected my head well.
Meanwhile as your shield moved with that of the blade of mine I drew along the edge of your shield using it as a pendelum (spelling) so that the blade when I rose using the right foot to kick off with into your form that perhaps I'd slide the blade overtop of your lowered shield and now nicely presented front to slice you nicely through, like a Tuchuk Shiskabob.. or, atleast spring the sword forewards as I made a jab towards your center torso with the blade. I then set the shield that was to the left to being placed down once more across that of my left side, to cover the whole left side, from the left shoulder, all the way to the top of the kneecap once more. Angled to that of your right, where your sword was at.
Works and You are taking a short sword blow to the head, edge first as I see it was an attacking move that started it off, You could have lifted the shield and leaned to Your right side as much and fast as possible to lessen the blow Man. I see You now as dazed and slow for a move and if You had not said the it hit Your shield to lessen the impact I would have you knocked the fuck out.
The shield, the left? – 1 confusion but works
6
(10/09/06-16:19:46) {{{Killer of the Sleen}}}
Zhou Yu
{{{Outrider}}}
== On the sand of the Fighting Pit ==
: says to Ollie Olafson Isle of Sc:.... The distance was 1 foot close promixity this was an inclose fight to be sure as My blade goes with the motion of Your shiled My arm wasnt fully bent so I can easily retract My weapon back at the saem time My shield angles with Your siled keeping the face of it holding Your steel there as you rise up and so do I using My right foot I keep My shields face covering My My left side and My left foot shifts forward while My right foot shifts back half a pace behind Me swinging My shiled face first in a left to right motion to cover My upper chest and head area attempting to let Your sword skitter acorss and away to My right
simlataneosuly as I rose up with You I bring My hand with blade poiting vertiacl in an overhanded chop aimed at Yiur would be rigfht shoulder hoppng the blade renders yoru arm useless and end this fight here
He is using the edge of Your shield as a guide, am reading this as You bloke His blade with Yours and then do a shield push over to what I think is Your right side. Read that a few times and so –1 for being unclear as it reads as a clusterfuck. I am seeing Ollie as being slow and clumsy from the head ding so will let this ride on but Your still taking a gash on Your right shoulder as I see a long sword from that close still making contact.
Works
6
Final Defence
(10/09/06-16:32:10)
Ollie Olafson
Isle of Scagnar - CC
== On the sand of the Fighting Pit ==
: says to {{{Killer of the Sleen}}:.... Seeing your blade come from that of my left side, as My blade was to your right side, and your blade outside of the blade of mine, which was already to your right side. I just simply pivot on that of the left leg, drawing away the whole right side of mine, away from you, the right foot slipping behind the left foot. In doing this I also kept that of the shield of Mine, in the middle of your blade and that of the shoulder of mine which had now dissapeared from the intended chop downwards. If this was not enough I pulled my blade's pommel upwards towards My head, tipping the blade down as I shoved the pommel forewards and to my left and over the head, in essence, I was angling the blade to act as a bar that would as it was under your blade, push your blade up and overtop incase that of the shield was not enough to keep you at bay. *Final Defence*
I then stepped away from you with a shuffle step.. so that there was a pace
Works
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Result:
Ollie: 6 Stunned head shot
Zhou: 6 cut to right shoulder
Winner: Draw…another 3 rounds to clear it up
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Comments:
Confusing and messy in parts, lacking in directional description. From the stage both of You are at this was a poor show from what I was expecting. Good luck in the future bouts.
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Prodigy Rules
3 Rounds
No Time Limits
Mock Everything
Stances
10/09/06-15:29:34)
Ollie Olafson
Isle of Scagnar - CC
== In the Stands that surround the Fighting Pit ==
: says to {{{Killer of the Sleen}}:.... Looking down at you from the 8+ feet, 100 stones (400lb's), A steel Torvaldslander helm with a nastal and mail drape on my head was placed over the head with the left hand, a leather jerkin with woolen tunic, Master belt, and Tool Belt, leather britches and tarnboots.
A 38” double edged longsword, 12” hilt and 8” cross guard in in my right hand over my right shoulderblade, point facing away from you.
In the left arm a 48" diameter Torvaldsland shield, a 10" diameter steel boss center, the shield made of wood, with that of a leather stretched hide on top. Clipped into place by metal flat clips on the sides of the shield. The shield's placement was a hand from the bottom of the chin. Three inches from the center of my body, out about a hand angled to the left, to allow right hand movement.
A 8" quiva rests in a sheath to the left of my masterbelt.
"Well, good to meetcha there Zhou... of the Tuchuk..."
8’
400lbs
Helm Y visor
Right hand 38” Torv longsword
Left hand 48” round shield . Note: don’t use ‘hand’ as a distance when taking about hands Man.
8” Quiva left hip am going with
10/09/06-15:33:04) {{{Killer of the Sleen}}}
Zhou Yu
{{{Outrider}}}
== On the sand of the Fighting Pit ==
: says to ALL:.... Walkign towards the sands I hope into the pit placing My y slotted helm onto My head strapping it up soon after My right hand draws My 22" gorean shortsword 4inch blade walking to the center of the pit sitting on My left arm was a round shiled 24" inches that covers My left shoulder and arm My right foot sweeps back bahind Me left foot points toes forward right holding My steel hilt hip level tip of the blade points to vertically as I keep My left saide face You as I nod ready to go
6’
200lbs
Helm on head Y visor
Right hand 22” short sword (4 inch blade? Assume you mean ‘width’)
Left hand 24” round shield
No distance….never a clever thing to miss out on!!
Round 1
10/09/06-15:39:15)
Ollie Olafson
Isle of Scagnar - CC
== On the sand of the Fighting Pit ==
: says to {{{Killer of the Sleen}}:.... I hold my shield level and to the left the right edge comming to about middle of my frame. The top of which was under the chin, the bottom was just above that of the kneecap, angled so the boss center was at your middle. Stepping forewards to being at a foot and a half, I drew the sword down and to that of the left going to try and hit your left side of the waist, angling it to go upwards under that of your shield's edge as the pommel of the blade was pushed forewards, to angle the sword up and around your shield. on the left side of it.
The left? Ollie you need to say who’s left –1 confusion
You need to space Your counter from the reaction –1
THAT was an ugly arse start if ever I have seen one, I would not normally say so for a newbie…but Your not…get a grip Big Man.
Distance now 1.5 feet
8
10/09/06-15:45:57) {{{Killer of the Sleen}}}
Zhou Yu
{{{Outrider}}}
== On the sand of the Fighting Pit ==
: says to Ollie Olafson Isle of Sc:.... At the same time You are comming in 1"1./2 feet from My left side it was facing You My left foot darts back half a pace behiund Me right foot following up to come ahead of Me half a pace My left arm drops My shiled down to cover My left side hoepfully I catch Your sword My right foot digs in to the sand and I give a hard shove right to left mottion to attempt to sohove Your sword hard and to the the right (My left )
simaltaneiously I thrust and tip My sword aimed at Your left knee cap attemtping to rend Your big tree trunk leg out of comotion
You are taking a full block on that small shield from a HUGE giant of a Man, the North sword is made for smashing shields and for cleaving people in twain, You would also be shunted over to Your right side from a blow like this and that little Casius Clay shuffle. So –1 unrealistic but it does work and I am having Your shield cracked, You take more full on blows like that and the shield You have will not survive.
9
Round 2
10/09/06-15:56:16)
Ollie Olafson
Isle of Scagnar - CC
== On the sand of the Fighting Pit ==
: says to {{{Killer of the Sleen}}:.... "Come on... I have a bond to play with in about ten.." I said wiggling them eyebrows atcha. I watched you do the fancy two stepp'n, good movements mostly. I push down on the left leg, dropping to a kneel, in doing such the movement is also good to bring the shield that was already there at the top of the kneecap to covering the whole left leg and chest nicely. Meaning that your sword would hopefully be deflected off the middle of the shield, as I did this simple movement as you did a few movements to try and get out of the original quick strike I had done to you.
I then take full advatage of your shield being out to the far left, as my own sword just swept down the length of your shield and as I fell so did the blade going to using the edge of your shield as a guide as I drew the sword now from that of your left side, at your kneecap, using the angle of my shield that was still angled to your center to perhaps hide the impact the sword would make on your leg. As the edge of my shield was at my waist, and now almost to finding purchase but not overly to that of your waist from you moving inwards on me. I twisted the blade that was arriving to your left leg, all the way up and perhaps go and cut off some precious parts of your's or cut you in two.. "Hope ya don't want kids.." I said as the blade rose between your legs, or that was the hope if successful in slicing through your left leg or atleast along it. I also push forewards on that of the left knee, so that I would move the blade nice and squarely foreward into you.
That works
Far left? HIS far left –1, a bit messy but I get what You are going for here, I would skip the chat as that will give someone the opening of saying your slower and as You chat and strike I… ta dar!
7
(10/09/06-16:02:39) {{{Killer of the Sleen}}}
Zhou Yu
{{{Outrider}}}
== On the sand of the Fighting Pit ==
: says to Ollie Olafson Isle of Sc:.... Quickly dropping with the motions of Your blade that wants to sink down with Your body I keep it covering My left side dropping My arm hard letting the face of My shiled come down to cover My left knee right ;lleg pants down frim on the knee left knee bends as well shiled covering My left knee I move the shiled from left to right sovering My lower body from left leg over to My hips attmepting to stop your blade here
My right arm angles My blade arm cocks up elbow bends and I thrust My sword that was comming back from the delfected attack aimed at Your inner rtight arm where the shoulder meets the rest of the body attemtping to rend and cripple your sword arm
left to right? Yours or His…is this contagious? –1 but I get what Your doing and from that close is not going to have the same impact on a shield as a swing would.
You going over the top or around that HUGE shield of His? –1 lack of description. It is vital when a shield is in play to say HOW you are dealing with that obstacle.
7
Round 3
10/09/06-16:09:49)
Ollie Olafson
Isle of Scagnar - CC
== On the sand of the Fighting Pit ==
: says to {{{Killer of the Sleen}}:.... I just nicely push that of the shield upwards like a crashing rocket to the left side of mine, angling the edge of the shield so that it matches with the tip of the head, the movement did not need to be much, as the small amount of 'avaiability' of space you would have to go for was removed and instead a wall of shield was now presented to your lovely attempt, the shield covering now that of the whole left arm nicely. Meaning the shielder was now covered with shield, and I got a nice nasty 'CLANG' as the edge of your sword had to go somewhere and that was to the side of the helmet I wore, which protected my head well.
Meanwhile as your shield moved with that of the blade of mine I drew along the edge of your shield using it as a pendelum (spelling) so that the blade when I rose using the right foot to kick off with into your form that perhaps I'd slide the blade overtop of your lowered shield and now nicely presented front to slice you nicely through, like a Tuchuk Shiskabob.. or, atleast spring the sword forewards as I made a jab towards your center torso with the blade. I then set the shield that was to the left to being placed down once more across that of my left side, to cover the whole left side, from the left shoulder, all the way to the top of the kneecap once more. Angled to that of your right, where your sword was at.
Works and You are taking a short sword blow to the head, edge first as I see it was an attacking move that started it off, You could have lifted the shield and leaned to Your right side as much and fast as possible to lessen the blow Man. I see You now as dazed and slow for a move and if You had not said the it hit Your shield to lessen the impact I would have you knocked the fuck out.
The shield, the left? – 1 confusion but works
6
(10/09/06-16:19:46) {{{Killer of the Sleen}}}
Zhou Yu
{{{Outrider}}}
== On the sand of the Fighting Pit ==
: says to Ollie Olafson Isle of Sc:.... The distance was 1 foot close promixity this was an inclose fight to be sure as My blade goes with the motion of Your shiled My arm wasnt fully bent so I can easily retract My weapon back at the saem time My shield angles with Your siled keeping the face of it holding Your steel there as you rise up and so do I using My right foot I keep My shields face covering My My left side and My left foot shifts forward while My right foot shifts back half a pace behind Me swinging My shiled face first in a left to right motion to cover My upper chest and head area attempting to let Your sword skitter acorss and away to My right
simlataneosuly as I rose up with You I bring My hand with blade poiting vertiacl in an overhanded chop aimed at Yiur would be rigfht shoulder hoppng the blade renders yoru arm useless and end this fight here
He is using the edge of Your shield as a guide, am reading this as You bloke His blade with Yours and then do a shield push over to what I think is Your right side. Read that a few times and so –1 for being unclear as it reads as a clusterfuck. I am seeing Ollie as being slow and clumsy from the head ding so will let this ride on but Your still taking a gash on Your right shoulder as I see a long sword from that close still making contact.
Works
6
Final Defence
(10/09/06-16:32:10)
Ollie Olafson
Isle of Scagnar - CC
== On the sand of the Fighting Pit ==
: says to {{{Killer of the Sleen}}:.... Seeing your blade come from that of my left side, as My blade was to your right side, and your blade outside of the blade of mine, which was already to your right side. I just simply pivot on that of the left leg, drawing away the whole right side of mine, away from you, the right foot slipping behind the left foot. In doing this I also kept that of the shield of Mine, in the middle of your blade and that of the shoulder of mine which had now dissapeared from the intended chop downwards. If this was not enough I pulled my blade's pommel upwards towards My head, tipping the blade down as I shoved the pommel forewards and to my left and over the head, in essence, I was angling the blade to act as a bar that would as it was under your blade, push your blade up and overtop incase that of the shield was not enough to keep you at bay. *Final Defence*
I then stepped away from you with a shuffle step.. so that there was a pace
Works
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Result:
Ollie: 6 Stunned head shot
Zhou: 6 cut to right shoulder
Winner: Draw…another 3 rounds to clear it up
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Comments:
Confusing and messy in parts, lacking in directional description. From the stage both of You are at this was a poor show from what I was expecting. Good luck in the future bouts.
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