Post by Witness Despoiler on Feb 21, 2006 23:22:14 GMT -5
Time Waived.
------------ Weapons and Stance ------------
(20:22:48 )
Pelagon
Guest of Hulneth GRP
Cabin # 1
is in the large main field and says to C R E E D| Property of A: I stand 6ft 5ins tall, I weigh in at 220lbs, I am Torvie by birth-father unknown...my muscular body facing you so my left sides leads on to give less of a target area...my northern styled helmet is on head and chin strap is secure...a 22in short sword in my right hand the blade is horizontal to the ground, at waist height, while my elbow is bent at a perpendicular angle, the tip of the blade facing you. My 3ft Gorean round shield that's made of layers of hardened leather and bound together by iron strapping with a iron rim is strapped to my lower left arm, it's held in front of my body covering from my throat to mid thighs. Two 8ins throwing daggers one on each hip within sheathes...one 2ft throwing axe is on my right hip end of handle facing the ground is pushed between my body and belt.
Northern helm
36" round on left
22" short in right
24" axe on belt
8" dagger on each side
6'5", 220lbs
No distance stated
(20:27:42 )
C R E E D
| Property of Ariel |
is in the large main field and says to Pelagon Guest of Hulneth: yeah here let me fix it so its easier to understand.....I stood at roughly six feet tall and around two hundred twenty pounds, my eyes glanced to you silently as I stood there I pulled into my left hand my turian shield it was forty by twenty inches and I brought it up to cover from my left shoulder to my right shoulder and down to mid upper thighs leaving only enough room on my right side to swing that of my short sword of twenty two inches which I held tightly in my right hand. , breathing slowly and calmly I nodded my head ensuring that my Y slotted helm was indeed strapped firmly in place, On my right hip was a spare short of twenty two inches in a sheathe upon my back was a killing dagger of twelve inches given to me by an assassin as a parting gift in the last tourney when I had beat him. I was wearing light weight pants with boots on, and a tunic of similar weight as I breathed in slowly I took my stance, my left foot was slightly in front of my right, leaving me in a left foot lead as my feet were shoulder width apart. I bent slightly at my knees watching you with keen interest as I waited for you to move knowing my stance would allow me to move to keep you centered to me at a moments notice. With one last nod of my head I let you know I was ready to fight
Y slot helm
40X20 Turian shield in left
22" shor in right
22" short on hip
6', 220lbs
No distance stated.
------------ Round One ------------
(20:43:49 )
Pelagon
Guest of Hulneth GRP
Cabin # 1
is in the large main field and says to C R E E D| Property of A: I instantly swings my shiled hard from my right to left in an opening door defensive movement against your shiled with an aim to push your shiled to your right side and also in the hopes that the two shileds movements will push against your sword moving it out of your attack postion
Hoping that my shiled has moved your shiled away from your left side enough to expose the left side of your chest, I pivots on the ball of my right foot to add more power behind my swords thrust towards your heart, my left foot moving just enough to aid in the powerful thrust but also to keep my balance..I hopes that my blade enters your chest between your 3rd and 4th ribs with an aim to pierce your heart...I pulls my shiled back into position in front of my body as I pulls my sword back towards me, again my elbow is at a perpendicular angle and the blade horizontal to the ground with the tip facing you.
Shield push
Clean.
( 10 )
(20:48:31 )
C R E E D
| Property of Ariel |
is in the large main field and says to Pelagon Guest of Hulneth:
I knew you'd be opening fast and hard and quickly I bring my left foot back behind my right quickly at the same time I'm pivoting my left held shield is coming tightly against my body so that with your shield swing it scrapes across the surface of my shield and knocks me backwards half a step from not setting myself more perfectly and clean but it also leaves my shield in the perfect position as your thrust would be coming in it would still hit the face of my shield leaving both my shield in the same position and me still breathing as you are unable to get to my chest at all due to the positioning of my shield
it is then that I quickly take a half step towards Your left side at the same time I'm moving to Your left my right my right held short is coming upwards counterclockwise (mpov) around the outer edge of your left held shield and cing around behind your neck and aiming to slice deeply into your neck and perhaps leave you unable to continue due to partially severing your head from your shoulders.
Clean
Clean
( 10 )
------------ Round Two ------------
(21:02:05 )
Pelagon
Guest of Hulneth GRP
Cabin # 1
is in the large main field and says to C R E E D| Property of A: I see your movements to my left side, I instantly pivot on the left ball of foot towards my left so that Im facing you, my right foot moving with a quick ease, positioned behind my left but to the right to keep my balance...simultaneously I thrust my shiled against your sword with an aim to deflect it from my neck, thinking my head is beter left on my body thanks...
I steps to my left one pace then moves forwards one pace, I turns to my right so that I am facing towards your right side, I keeps my shiled in front of my body as I swings my sword in a crescent shaped movement towards your neck, with the hopes of cleaving your head from your body...as I moves my shiled so that its properly covering my body again I drops my sword to the ground and pulls from the right side of my belt my axe with my right hand, I raise my axe as I bend my elbow, and brings the axe back so that the head of the axe is over my right shoulder, my grip firm on the handle...
I think the pivot is a little screwy...but given the prior position of the shield, this works ok.
Ok...waaaaaaaay too many mvements/actions here for a start -1
The attack would be ok if you gave a description as to where exactly you were attacking and how the sword got there also -1
This is to be a flowing movement.....you have stepped twice, swung, moved shield, reset, dropped sword. drew axe and then cocked it back....you need to ease back on the actions Man....if you had left it a diagonal step forwards with a cleanly wrorded attack this would have been ok.
( 8 )
(21:09:19 )
C R E E D
| Property of Ariel |
is in the large main field and says to Pelagon Guest of Hulneth:
thinks you have a lot of movements in just one attack and blinks a moment and quickly as you move to my right side I quickly move towards my left by two feet and go down onto my right knee at the same time also ducking behind my shield fully with my whole body slightly positioning my shield towards my right side so that when you get in tight and close as one pace is equal to three feet I am down low and off to your right a bit so that your right held short would just barely miss my skin from having moved off to my left and gone downwards onto my right knee all in one fluid motion
it was then that I quickly push myself back upwards and towards you, as I'm pushing upwards my right held short comes upwards in a thrust, going around my own shield so I don't hit it as I did move it slightly, from the right held shorts now low position from having gone to my knee aiming to come into your right side about stomach level and drive it upwards into your chest cavity and up out of your neck, in fact impaling you swiftly and in a not so clean manner as I hoped to end the fight here I do this by coming to the outer right rim of your shield (your pov) aiming to use it as a guide to kill you swiftly
This works
Clean
( 10 )
------------ Round Three ------------
(21:29:44 )
Pelagon
Guest of Hulneth GRP
Cabin # 1
is in the large main field and says to C R E E D| Property of A: I take a step towards you to shorten the distance between us to within 2ft of each other, as you start to rise to your feet with a hard thrust of my shiled, I pump it down towards your blade, as you thrust upwards towards my body, my aim is to deflect your blade and to push you off balance by the force of my shiled hitting your blade, I also hope that with the closeness of your sword to your shiled that part of my shiled hits yours in such a way as to push it down wards
As my axe is still positioned above and behind my right shoulder, I swings it down in an arc hard towards the right upper side of your head, in the hopes that the sharpness of the blade will cut through your helmet and into your head, with the aim to the axe cutting into your brain...I pulls my shiled back in front of my body and pulls the axe back towards my body, back into the position where the head of the axe is above and over my right shoulder..
This is not a bad defense, though the wording dcould be run together a little better, or you could have counterattacked. I see the sword biting your right side as you deflect it as you stepped in as He was thrusting and rising. -1
This is ok...just watch the reset...
( 7 )
(21:36:05 )
C R E E D
| Property of Ariel |
is in the large main field and says to Pelagon Guest of Hulneth:
groans some and as you step in I quickly take a step backwards straight back and not off to any side at the same time I'm moving back my right held short is coming upwards in a horizontal position over my head about a foot above my head, aiming to catch your axe along it's shaft, with my short above my head, once your axe shaft touches into my short I press upwards with my short aiming to bring the blade of your axe upwards and keep it at bay from hitting into my head so that by doing this I have an upperhand at keeping my head and my brain still beating blood and shit
with that being finished and you once more reset I quickly step in towards you keeping you centered and at the same time as I step forwards to come to within less than one foot of you, my right held short comes downwards aiming to bring my short behind your left side shoulder aiming to snap the blade into your back and causing you to die swiftly hoping my blade imbeds somewhere near your left side spine and perhaps paralyze you or cause you to go into shock.
This is ok.
Clean enough
( 10 )
------------ Round Four ------------
(21:48:28 )
Pelagon
Guest of Hulneth GRP
Cabin # 1
is in the large main field and says to C R E E D| Property of A: As you steps to within one foot of me, I instantly steps to right one pace and raises my shield in the hopes that your blade hits the face of my shiled
I swing my axe hard from right to left towards the left side of your neck, with an aim to burying the axe deeply into your neck hoping to cleave your head from the rest of your body...I bring my shiled back in front of my body and pulls the axe hopefully dripping with you blood back towards me so that the head is above and over my right shoulder...
Ok.....He is wrapping around and stabbing in....all you have done is stepped right and raised your shield up...not towards your left...I see the stab entering your left side slightly to the back as you moved and it entering far enough to do some nasty damage to your inner self. Fight is over here.
All youneeded do was pivot your left side back and swing your shield out and you would have been fine.
(21:53:07 )
C R E E D
| Property of Ariel |
is in the large main field and says to Pelagon Guest of Hulneth:
I see your stance and quickly I drop down to my left knee tugging my shield and short down low with me so that when your swing from your right to left with your axe happens I am down low behind my shield so that your axe indeed misses my head and leaves me with my shoulders and head intact
quick to react as you were tugging your axe backwards, I once more push upwards, towards you, at the same time I'm pushing upwards however, my right held short is thrusting upwards towards your exposed left knee just beneath the knee cap hoping to slice deeply into your knee as I continue upwards I aim to bring my blade slicing through your left side body hoping to drive your shield upwards with my momentum as well and clear into you're your upper body slicing into it and hoping you lose enough blood.
------------ Round Five ------------
(22:10:41 )
Pelagon
Guest of Hulneth GRP
Cabin # 1
is in the large main field and says to C R E E D| Property of A: As you push upwards to stand I simultaneously drops to my left knee, my shiled lowered with me so that its covering all of my body as I lower to the ground with the aim to protect my body...with me moving so quickly to my knee I hope that your blade hits against the face of my shiled and is deflected away
while upon my knee, I swings my axe in a horizontal to the ground movement from right to left towards your left knee cap with the aim to hack through your knee...I push upwards and takes half a step back wards, my shiled moving with my body to keep protecting it, my axe is pulled towards my body, head above and over my right shoulder...feet shoulder width apart, left foot 6" behind slightly angled to the left so that I keep my balance..
(22:14:05 )
C R E E D
| Property of Ariel |
is in the large main field and says to Pelagon Guest of Hulneth:
I saw you going to your knee and quickly I moved down to my knees both of them this time, moving the left held shield slightly as I drop down so that when I land on my knees the shield is covering my whole body and held tightly against me so that your axe has no chance of getting through, however your axe does manage to carve quite a nice straight line across the face but my shield is still intact
as you push upwards I grin and quickly my right held short, which is now down low and on my own right side I quickly thrust it upwards and to my left aiming for my blade to come towards your inner left thigh just below the bottom rim of your shield aiming to sink my blade in deep enough to cut vessels and arteries and leave you bloody and dead in the field
------------ Final Defense ------------
(22:28:09 )
Pelagon
Guest of Hulneth GRP
Cabin # 1
is in the large main field and says to C R E E D| Property of A: I see what he has in his mind to do as I am standing and he is dropping onto both his knees, he would be thinking to do as what I would do in that position, so as he drops to his knees, I move to my left one pace simultaneously thrusting my shiled hard against and in a right ways movement towards the tip of his blade attempting to push his blade to my right, in the hopes that his blade will be deflected, I move my shiled back towards my body covering from chin to thighs, my axe held down my side, the side of the blade of the axe leaning against the right shin.
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Result:
Winner by disabling blow: CREED.....moves to 2nd round.
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Comments:
As above. Pelagon, this is a great improvement from your last fight....just got to watch how Many actions and remember weapons placing. Well fought to both Men.
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Any comments, feel free
My thanks
Erus
------------ Weapons and Stance ------------
(20:22:48 )
Pelagon
Guest of Hulneth GRP
Cabin # 1
is in the large main field and says to C R E E D| Property of A: I stand 6ft 5ins tall, I weigh in at 220lbs, I am Torvie by birth-father unknown...my muscular body facing you so my left sides leads on to give less of a target area...my northern styled helmet is on head and chin strap is secure...a 22in short sword in my right hand the blade is horizontal to the ground, at waist height, while my elbow is bent at a perpendicular angle, the tip of the blade facing you. My 3ft Gorean round shield that's made of layers of hardened leather and bound together by iron strapping with a iron rim is strapped to my lower left arm, it's held in front of my body covering from my throat to mid thighs. Two 8ins throwing daggers one on each hip within sheathes...one 2ft throwing axe is on my right hip end of handle facing the ground is pushed between my body and belt.
Northern helm
36" round on left
22" short in right
24" axe on belt
8" dagger on each side
6'5", 220lbs
No distance stated
(20:27:42 )
C R E E D
| Property of Ariel |
is in the large main field and says to Pelagon Guest of Hulneth: yeah here let me fix it so its easier to understand.....I stood at roughly six feet tall and around two hundred twenty pounds, my eyes glanced to you silently as I stood there I pulled into my left hand my turian shield it was forty by twenty inches and I brought it up to cover from my left shoulder to my right shoulder and down to mid upper thighs leaving only enough room on my right side to swing that of my short sword of twenty two inches which I held tightly in my right hand. , breathing slowly and calmly I nodded my head ensuring that my Y slotted helm was indeed strapped firmly in place, On my right hip was a spare short of twenty two inches in a sheathe upon my back was a killing dagger of twelve inches given to me by an assassin as a parting gift in the last tourney when I had beat him. I was wearing light weight pants with boots on, and a tunic of similar weight as I breathed in slowly I took my stance, my left foot was slightly in front of my right, leaving me in a left foot lead as my feet were shoulder width apart. I bent slightly at my knees watching you with keen interest as I waited for you to move knowing my stance would allow me to move to keep you centered to me at a moments notice. With one last nod of my head I let you know I was ready to fight
Y slot helm
40X20 Turian shield in left
22" shor in right
22" short on hip
6', 220lbs
No distance stated.
------------ Round One ------------
(20:43:49 )
Pelagon
Guest of Hulneth GRP
Cabin # 1
is in the large main field and says to C R E E D| Property of A: I instantly swings my shiled hard from my right to left in an opening door defensive movement against your shiled with an aim to push your shiled to your right side and also in the hopes that the two shileds movements will push against your sword moving it out of your attack postion
Hoping that my shiled has moved your shiled away from your left side enough to expose the left side of your chest, I pivots on the ball of my right foot to add more power behind my swords thrust towards your heart, my left foot moving just enough to aid in the powerful thrust but also to keep my balance..I hopes that my blade enters your chest between your 3rd and 4th ribs with an aim to pierce your heart...I pulls my shiled back into position in front of my body as I pulls my sword back towards me, again my elbow is at a perpendicular angle and the blade horizontal to the ground with the tip facing you.
Shield push
Clean.
( 10 )
(20:48:31 )
C R E E D
| Property of Ariel |
is in the large main field and says to Pelagon Guest of Hulneth:
I knew you'd be opening fast and hard and quickly I bring my left foot back behind my right quickly at the same time I'm pivoting my left held shield is coming tightly against my body so that with your shield swing it scrapes across the surface of my shield and knocks me backwards half a step from not setting myself more perfectly and clean but it also leaves my shield in the perfect position as your thrust would be coming in it would still hit the face of my shield leaving both my shield in the same position and me still breathing as you are unable to get to my chest at all due to the positioning of my shield
it is then that I quickly take a half step towards Your left side at the same time I'm moving to Your left my right my right held short is coming upwards counterclockwise (mpov) around the outer edge of your left held shield and cing around behind your neck and aiming to slice deeply into your neck and perhaps leave you unable to continue due to partially severing your head from your shoulders.
Clean
Clean
( 10 )
------------ Round Two ------------
(21:02:05 )
Pelagon
Guest of Hulneth GRP
Cabin # 1
is in the large main field and says to C R E E D| Property of A: I see your movements to my left side, I instantly pivot on the left ball of foot towards my left so that Im facing you, my right foot moving with a quick ease, positioned behind my left but to the right to keep my balance...simultaneously I thrust my shiled against your sword with an aim to deflect it from my neck, thinking my head is beter left on my body thanks...
I steps to my left one pace then moves forwards one pace, I turns to my right so that I am facing towards your right side, I keeps my shiled in front of my body as I swings my sword in a crescent shaped movement towards your neck, with the hopes of cleaving your head from your body...as I moves my shiled so that its properly covering my body again I drops my sword to the ground and pulls from the right side of my belt my axe with my right hand, I raise my axe as I bend my elbow, and brings the axe back so that the head of the axe is over my right shoulder, my grip firm on the handle...
I think the pivot is a little screwy...but given the prior position of the shield, this works ok.
Ok...waaaaaaaay too many mvements/actions here for a start -1
The attack would be ok if you gave a description as to where exactly you were attacking and how the sword got there also -1
This is to be a flowing movement.....you have stepped twice, swung, moved shield, reset, dropped sword. drew axe and then cocked it back....you need to ease back on the actions Man....if you had left it a diagonal step forwards with a cleanly wrorded attack this would have been ok.
( 8 )
(21:09:19 )
C R E E D
| Property of Ariel |
is in the large main field and says to Pelagon Guest of Hulneth:
thinks you have a lot of movements in just one attack and blinks a moment and quickly as you move to my right side I quickly move towards my left by two feet and go down onto my right knee at the same time also ducking behind my shield fully with my whole body slightly positioning my shield towards my right side so that when you get in tight and close as one pace is equal to three feet I am down low and off to your right a bit so that your right held short would just barely miss my skin from having moved off to my left and gone downwards onto my right knee all in one fluid motion
it was then that I quickly push myself back upwards and towards you, as I'm pushing upwards my right held short comes upwards in a thrust, going around my own shield so I don't hit it as I did move it slightly, from the right held shorts now low position from having gone to my knee aiming to come into your right side about stomach level and drive it upwards into your chest cavity and up out of your neck, in fact impaling you swiftly and in a not so clean manner as I hoped to end the fight here I do this by coming to the outer right rim of your shield (your pov) aiming to use it as a guide to kill you swiftly
This works
Clean
( 10 )
------------ Round Three ------------
(21:29:44 )
Pelagon
Guest of Hulneth GRP
Cabin # 1
is in the large main field and says to C R E E D| Property of A: I take a step towards you to shorten the distance between us to within 2ft of each other, as you start to rise to your feet with a hard thrust of my shiled, I pump it down towards your blade, as you thrust upwards towards my body, my aim is to deflect your blade and to push you off balance by the force of my shiled hitting your blade, I also hope that with the closeness of your sword to your shiled that part of my shiled hits yours in such a way as to push it down wards
As my axe is still positioned above and behind my right shoulder, I swings it down in an arc hard towards the right upper side of your head, in the hopes that the sharpness of the blade will cut through your helmet and into your head, with the aim to the axe cutting into your brain...I pulls my shiled back in front of my body and pulls the axe back towards my body, back into the position where the head of the axe is above and over my right shoulder..
This is not a bad defense, though the wording dcould be run together a little better, or you could have counterattacked. I see the sword biting your right side as you deflect it as you stepped in as He was thrusting and rising. -1
This is ok...just watch the reset...
( 7 )
(21:36:05 )
C R E E D
| Property of Ariel |
is in the large main field and says to Pelagon Guest of Hulneth:
groans some and as you step in I quickly take a step backwards straight back and not off to any side at the same time I'm moving back my right held short is coming upwards in a horizontal position over my head about a foot above my head, aiming to catch your axe along it's shaft, with my short above my head, once your axe shaft touches into my short I press upwards with my short aiming to bring the blade of your axe upwards and keep it at bay from hitting into my head so that by doing this I have an upperhand at keeping my head and my brain still beating blood and shit
with that being finished and you once more reset I quickly step in towards you keeping you centered and at the same time as I step forwards to come to within less than one foot of you, my right held short comes downwards aiming to bring my short behind your left side shoulder aiming to snap the blade into your back and causing you to die swiftly hoping my blade imbeds somewhere near your left side spine and perhaps paralyze you or cause you to go into shock.
This is ok.
Clean enough
( 10 )
------------ Round Four ------------
(21:48:28 )
Pelagon
Guest of Hulneth GRP
Cabin # 1
is in the large main field and says to C R E E D| Property of A: As you steps to within one foot of me, I instantly steps to right one pace and raises my shield in the hopes that your blade hits the face of my shiled
I swing my axe hard from right to left towards the left side of your neck, with an aim to burying the axe deeply into your neck hoping to cleave your head from the rest of your body...I bring my shiled back in front of my body and pulls the axe hopefully dripping with you blood back towards me so that the head is above and over my right shoulder...
Ok.....He is wrapping around and stabbing in....all you have done is stepped right and raised your shield up...not towards your left...I see the stab entering your left side slightly to the back as you moved and it entering far enough to do some nasty damage to your inner self. Fight is over here.
All youneeded do was pivot your left side back and swing your shield out and you would have been fine.
(21:53:07 )
C R E E D
| Property of Ariel |
is in the large main field and says to Pelagon Guest of Hulneth:
I see your stance and quickly I drop down to my left knee tugging my shield and short down low with me so that when your swing from your right to left with your axe happens I am down low behind my shield so that your axe indeed misses my head and leaves me with my shoulders and head intact
quick to react as you were tugging your axe backwards, I once more push upwards, towards you, at the same time I'm pushing upwards however, my right held short is thrusting upwards towards your exposed left knee just beneath the knee cap hoping to slice deeply into your knee as I continue upwards I aim to bring my blade slicing through your left side body hoping to drive your shield upwards with my momentum as well and clear into you're your upper body slicing into it and hoping you lose enough blood.
------------ Round Five ------------
(22:10:41 )
Pelagon
Guest of Hulneth GRP
Cabin # 1
is in the large main field and says to C R E E D| Property of A: As you push upwards to stand I simultaneously drops to my left knee, my shiled lowered with me so that its covering all of my body as I lower to the ground with the aim to protect my body...with me moving so quickly to my knee I hope that your blade hits against the face of my shiled and is deflected away
while upon my knee, I swings my axe in a horizontal to the ground movement from right to left towards your left knee cap with the aim to hack through your knee...I push upwards and takes half a step back wards, my shiled moving with my body to keep protecting it, my axe is pulled towards my body, head above and over my right shoulder...feet shoulder width apart, left foot 6" behind slightly angled to the left so that I keep my balance..
(22:14:05 )
C R E E D
| Property of Ariel |
is in the large main field and says to Pelagon Guest of Hulneth:
I saw you going to your knee and quickly I moved down to my knees both of them this time, moving the left held shield slightly as I drop down so that when I land on my knees the shield is covering my whole body and held tightly against me so that your axe has no chance of getting through, however your axe does manage to carve quite a nice straight line across the face but my shield is still intact
as you push upwards I grin and quickly my right held short, which is now down low and on my own right side I quickly thrust it upwards and to my left aiming for my blade to come towards your inner left thigh just below the bottom rim of your shield aiming to sink my blade in deep enough to cut vessels and arteries and leave you bloody and dead in the field
------------ Final Defense ------------
(22:28:09 )
Pelagon
Guest of Hulneth GRP
Cabin # 1
is in the large main field and says to C R E E D| Property of A: I see what he has in his mind to do as I am standing and he is dropping onto both his knees, he would be thinking to do as what I would do in that position, so as he drops to his knees, I move to my left one pace simultaneously thrusting my shiled hard against and in a right ways movement towards the tip of his blade attempting to push his blade to my right, in the hopes that his blade will be deflected, I move my shiled back towards my body covering from chin to thighs, my axe held down my side, the side of the blade of the axe leaning against the right shin.
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Result:
Winner by disabling blow: CREED.....moves to 2nd round.
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Comments:
As above. Pelagon, this is a great improvement from your last fight....just got to watch how Many actions and remember weapons placing. Well fought to both Men.
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Any comments, feel free
My thanks
Erus